Friday, April 12, 2013

Journal 16: My Exposition




Do you believe in aliens? Do you believe in there’re armies in the outer space? In the 2300 A.D, there is one event call “the end of the Washington”, this event isn’t causes of the natural disasters, battles, or people. It’s causes by an alien army from the outer space. Washington Navy School is the best Navy schools in the United State, A guy named “Austin Bryant” who works in the school cafeteria was always dreaming to become a hero, however, there are no any opportunities to let his dreams come true. Until one day, it was a sunny day, but the sky suddenly became dark and an army with a lot of strange technologies began to killing people and destroying the buildings. Bryant smelled something weird. He looked at outside, then he realized sky turns dark, lots of died body outside the street, he was nervous and does not know what else he could do, people started to escape and no one else is inside the school, he saw a lot of strange flying stuffs on the sky, in side the flying machine, there’re lots of people, he was not even sure the things inside the machine are human.

2 comments:

  1. It is really interesting. You used the different way to write your exposition. Most of people started by once upon the time or what years ago. But you were talking about the story in the future!

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  2. yes! this is a science fiction story! and I set the time to future, to make audience become more interesting with the story, it's about the alien invade the Washington D,C in the future, thank you for your comment!

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