Bryant memorized about his lizard pet, he
realized the eyes of his lizard was same as those aliens’ eyes, and every time
when the weather was sunny day, his lizard will always hiding from the
sunlight. Bryant started to guess the aliens might be afraid of sunlight, too.
He look at his watch, it is 4:55 AM right now, he decided to bring those aliens
to the beach in 5 minutes, he shoot those aliens and ran away to the beach
beside the town, as he ran into the beach, he was out of ammo. Bryant was
nervous, then he jumped into the ocean, and swum as far as he can. Meanwhile,
he discovered the aliens stopped to chasing him and waiting him beside the
beach, he realized the aliens were not only afraid of sunlight, they are also
afraid of water. 5 minutes has passed away, the sun came out at the same time,
those aliens started to hide from the sun, Bryant returned to the beach and
found a gigantic water gun, he brought the water gun and find the aliens, he
shoot them by the gigantic water gun, then the aliens was burning quickly. The legs
and hands began to disappeared.
Daniel:
ReplyDeleteIt is a good climax in your story, you let the story getting more interesting, and your main character in the story is so brave, nice one.
-Vivi Weng
Daniel:
ReplyDeleteIt’s very lucky for Bryant that he had found the way to kill the aliens very quick. And it’s not only need the mental, it also need the physical strength. It made me want to carry for him.
- Peggy Hsieh